Revisions

For starters, my final paper has a title, unlike my rough draft. To be honest, i only changed some of the stuff my paper had pointed out to me in my paper. So i wouldn't consider them major revisions, the reason is because i didn't really think it was necessary for a lot of changes, just a little bit. Most of the errors i got were adding a word here and there that the sentence would have worked without. The biggest reason i did do the revisions i did were from peer review, my partner made some good points on a few things i should take out. I think the description i have in my paper is the strongest aspect, while i would consider the ending to be the weakest.